She Said, He Said
What is the point of this? Clara complaining that the Doctor hasn’t told her who he is, boo hoo.
Why is Clara trying not to fall in love with the Doctor. They never showed us this. You can’t just say it, and it’s true, you need to demonstrate that Clara is trying not to fall in love with the Doctor. Also, if you’re going to drop that, you should at least make it as part of the story.
Nightmare In Silver
Why children?
This is very borg. More borg than the Cybermen ever were.
If it was all in the Doctor’s head, and they weren’t cutting back to the Doctor being shocked, spinning and being the other person, that would be much better.